Creation Heals
Dew drop dripping down
Slips from emerald leaf, falls
Heavy to the ground
Hitting slate below
Cold and grey as dewy sky
Yet hard, green with moss
Ker plunk, drip, plop, splat
Each drop with a unique voice
Drums a calming hum
Creation carries
On, a pattern all its own
Outside my window
Unaware that my
Heavy heart receives each drop
Like a healing balm
Good for Me 12.30.06
9 comments:
The capitalization is not really necessary is it? Might read a bit better without that. Lovely poem otherwise. Why is it on a different blog though? The artist and the person are segreggated?
hey e. no, probably not. good feedback, thanks. i have two blogs -- one i don't put things on much and is mostly poetry and photos, as you can see. but i also put this poem on my other main blog.
Oh, this is just lovely!
gee, thanks!
It's beautiful *hugs poem*
^_^
This is so beautiful. Just beautiful.
ahira - thanks for visiting! and thank you!
candace - so glad you came by. and by the way, that's an awesome kick you've got there!
This is good.
grumble - aw, shucks.
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